Electorate 075

[crushthecamera]

Angie: "I guess we should clean up."

Anthony: "I guess so."





Angie: "I don't think I can go in there."

Anthony: "Do you want to go home?"

Angie: "No. I don't know."





Anthony: "We might be able to visit her tomorrow. I can find out."





Anthony: "I don't think we can stay here, though."

Angie: "No, you're right."





Angie: "I guess we should clean up. For her dad."

Anthony: "Yeah."

Comments

[danimaree]

As Marty would say: "This is heavy."

I love the non-linear way you tell this story. It's very interesting going back and piecing it all together.

[crushthecamera]

It's been interesting for me, too, since I finished writing it, to go back knowing about it what I know now. I think it all hangs together reasonably well. Or, hope.